http://sexualoddity.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] sexualoddity.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] cowboyguy 2015-08-23 06:53 pm (UTC)

I like this a lot :)

I love how actually, the way the prompt is, Dean could have come over as a total asshole, but you make it absolutely work for their characters.

I feel like maybe Dean is a little dismissive because he doesn't WANT Sam to be sick (maybe if he doesn't acknowledge it, it won't be true), and of course irritated-pissy-Sam is always brilliant, and you capture him perfectly. AAAAND then when Dean actually cottons on he's SO lovely. Its great that he barely says anything - it's all in the actions, getting Sam to sit down while he digs, carrying the stuff back to the car, getting him the tissues... So sweet!

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