Oh man. This is just what I needed after such a miserable week. But I'm barely able to keep my eyes open long enough to type this. So feedback will have to wait.
I loved it, though, especially the spellings. OMG and the stuffy talk. And Dean taking charge of both situations. And oh man, this part: “heh… Deand… deed a ti—hh… tiss—“
Love the description of the walk to the gravesite, too. Beautiful wording. And the bouncing flashlight beam. Seriously, this is beautiful. I love it. SO MUCH. Proper feedback when I can see straight.
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Date: 2015-07-26 04:26 am (UTC)I loved it, though, especially the spellings. OMG and the stuffy talk. And Dean taking charge of both situations. And oh man, this part: “heh… Deand… deed a ti—hh… tiss—“
Love the description of the walk to the gravesite, too. Beautiful wording. And the bouncing flashlight beam. Seriously, this is beautiful. I love it. SO MUCH. Proper feedback when I can see straight.